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O-Level素写作素材:高分句型举一反三

  • 2019-03-19     
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  O-Level写作中拿到高分,自然在写作句型上也不能太low了,那么具体哪些句型才能算得上是高分句型呢?今天课窝考试网小编为大家整理了两个比较有代表性的句子,为大家做详细的解析,希望对大家写作素材积累中能做到举一反三。

  句型1

  原文材料:

  "The new rules should thus expose polluters to a scissor-style pressure:from above,through the central-planning system,and from below,from the media and organisations such as Mr Ma's."

  推荐句型:

  xxx be exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through…, and from below, from….

  推荐理由:

  压力毫无疑问是一个写作和口语考试中非常常用的一个万能理由,因为它可以跟很多东西相关,比如压力的来源(生活压力,学习压力,工作压力),压力的影响(身体差,心情不爽),减压的方式和措施等等。

  上面的句型就可以用来描写某一个主体,比如工作的人或者学生,面临着双重压力,工作的人可能来自照顾老人抚养孩子;学生可能来自父母老师以及同伴。

O-Level素写作素材:高分句型举一反三

  原创例句:

  1. A majority of the youths today are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through looking after the ever growing aging population, and from below, from the soaring costs of raising children.

  2. A multitude of teenagers at present are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through their parents with ever-higher expectations, and from below, from their peers most of whom try their best to outdo each other.

  学以致用:

  1. People care more about public recognition than about money.

  根据上面的例句,这个题目我们可以选择不同意,那些苦逼的刚上班没几年的年轻人,怎么可能更在乎名而不是钱呢?他们压力多大啊,当然需要钱了啊;

  2. Younger school children should be required to study music and art in addition to language, science, and mathematics.

  同样,这个题目我们也可以选择不同意的立场,孩子们本来就压力特别大,父母期望高,同伴都一个比一个牛逼,学校里面的课程和辅导课都上不完呢,怎么可能有时间搞别的呢。这不是坑爹吗?

  句型2

  原文材料:

  While, arguably, this “finding” is as trivial as an umbrella that turns blue when it’s going to rain, there is nothing trivial about collecting personal data, as innocuous as that data may seem.

  推荐句型(变体):

  While...seems/sounds as adj. as can be, there is nothing more adj. than...

  推荐理由:

  我们在独立写作中经常用到对比的写法。这个句型可用在具有对比意味的语境中,前半句当作让步,“尽管对比中的一个因素看起来已经很…”, 后半句转折说“但是另一个因素更…”.

  原创例句:

  1. While environmental protection seems as pressing as can be, there is nothing more pressing than feeding the growing population in disadvantaged countries where the original eco-system is well preserved.

  2. While a secure job seems as tempting as can be, there is no job more tempting than a risky and well-paid one for the new generation who are mostly avid challenge hunters.

  3. While playing sports with a couple of friends sounds as relaxing as can be, there is nothing more relaxing than a good book or an old movie for those manual laborers who are wearied out with strenuous physical work every day.

  学以致用:

  1. Feeding the world’s growing population is more important than protecting environment.

  这道题中如果我们持同意的意见,就可以用到第一个例句。尽管到处都在宣扬保护环境的重要,但是并非世界各地的环境都破坏了啊,比如美丽的非洲大草原原始生态环境保持完好,但是一些边缘小国民不聊生,人民瘦的皮包骨,你说feed population重要还是保护环境重要呢?

  2. It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a risky one with a high salary.

  根据第二个例句,我们这道题可以不同意。虽然铁饭碗听起来挺诱人的,但新一代的年轻人个个都很傲娇,热衷追寻挑战,高薪高风险的工作相比之下更合他们的口味。

  3. To read a book or to watch a movie is a better way to relax than to do some physical exercises.

  第三个例句回答的就是这道题,确实约三五好友做做运动听起来不赖,但是对于那些每天做繁重体力劳动的工人来说,额外的运动会加重他们的身体负担,还是一本好书或者一部老电影更能帮他们放松。

  以上就是小编为大家整理的关于O-Level作文中高分句型讲解,大家平时要多多练习哦。更多新加坡olevel与国内区别、olevel考试科目等问题可以咨询我们。

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