O-Level 写作高分句式之让步论述类

　　看过这么多作文批改，小编总结出一些大家常犯的错误，其中一条就是“句式过于单一”，为了提高大家的O-Level写作水平，今天整理了一些O-Level作文写作满分句式推荐：让步论述类，句式丰富，文章才会出彩。

　　原文材料：

　　Less well-known, but no less competitive, are David and James Livingston, two brothers who, in April 2003, raced on opposite sides in the Oxford and Cambridge University Boat Race, one of the toughest sporting challenges in the world.

　　推荐句型：

　　Less+adj., but no less+adj.

　　推荐理由：

　　简洁又漂亮的让步句型。“虽然不。。，但是。。。”。大家可以体会Barack Obama在其就职演说中说的这段话:" These(指上文说的可以看得见的危机) are the indicators of crisis, subject to data and statistics. Less measurable, but no less profound is a sapping of confidence across our land--a nagging fear that America's decline is inevitable, and that the next generation must lower its sights."

　　原创例句：

　　1. Less measurable, but no less profound is the depression and stress felt by the young adults who struggle to survive in the metropolis.

　　2. Less measurable, but no less profound is the whopping adverse effect produced on the individuals and on their descendants by the modern city, which consists of monstrous edifices and of dark, narrow streets full of petrol fumes and toxic gases, torn by the noise of the taxicabs, lorries and buses, and thronged ceaselessly by great crowds.

　　3. Less well-known, but no less persuasive is the example of John Nash, an American mathematician who, in 1994, won the Nobel prize in economics for his ground-breaking work in the field of game theory.

　　学以致用：

　　1. Your job has greater happiness than your social life.

　　工作快乐还是社会生活更快乐。现在社会生活压力这么大，节奏这么快，工作狂才觉得工作更欢乐呢。所以如果不同意题目的说法，上面的例句就可以用上了。

　　Less measurable, but no less profound is the immense pressure that those fledgling employees undertake, who are eager to cover basic expense of living and maintain their daily life.

　　2. Agree or disagree, the rapid growth of cities has a mostly positive impact on the development of the society.

　　这个题目很显然可以原封不动得用上第二个例句，我们的立场是城市的发展对人们的影响是消极的，因为城市在规划的时候大部分都忽略了人们的感受，这影响能积极的了吗?

　　3. In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.

　　显然，我们这里可以直接套用第三个例句，也是持有相反态度，对于科学家来说，要想搞出点东西来，不能一味的模仿别人，还是有自己的个性，如果我们能够举两个例子，第二个例子就可以用上面的句型引出，总比用in addition, 或者 another example is 要强很多吧。　

　　以上就是小编为大家整理的关于O-Level写作写作考试让步句式总结，希望对大家有所帮助。更多olevel评分标准、olevel考试试题等问题可以咨询我们。