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PTE大作文如何写出高分?

  • 2022-10-12     
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  首先,同学们在写PTE大作文前需要明确一个点:电脑没有常识和逻辑,也不会联想。电脑所能做的仅仅只是判断同学们的文章在字面意思上有没有跑题。

  这里同学们请重点理解‘字面意思’这四个词,它对于大家文章的分数来说非常重要!!

  在讲具体的方法之前,黄老师先举个例子:

  假设题目需要同学们写‘environment’环境类的话题,A同学文章中出现了‘factories’工厂。

  那么,根据常识来看,工厂和环境显然是有关系的。但是!这两个词在字面意思上并没有直接的关联,所以就有一定几率被电脑识别成低分论述。

  那么,这时B同学文章中出现了‘pollution from factories’,那么这时污染就是一个和环境有字面关联的词了,所以这就是一个高分论述。

  同时,黄老师先给同学们提个醒:❌单纯的抄题目不能算关联性,并不是模板内把题目抄一遍,然后就可以为所欲为了(很多同学就是这样做的!)

  所以,同学们在写大作文时,需要确保自己写的信息(模板外的)尽量多出现与题干核心信息字面关联强的词句。

  p.s. ❌数字名称专家观点电脑无法识别,所以,千万不要写类似 according to a research by xxx university 类的信息了哦!)

  那么,黄老师接下来给大家分享两篇本周考过的PTE大作文真题范文,同学们可以体会一下,黄老师是如何关联题干核心词的吧!(范文来自于《雅培PTE满分答案 - 3月版》,需要的同学们请找黄老师免费领取哦!)

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  范文1

  ESSAY#001: Parents should be held legally responsible for what their children have done. What’s your opinion? Support it with examples.

  论点1:As legal guardians, parents have thelegal authorityand the corresponding duty to take care of their children, which includes preventing them from committing crime.

  展开 1:If their kids commitjuvenile delinquency, it is undoubted that parents have failed to fulfill such duty and should be punishable by law.

  论点2:Juvenile delinquency is often a direct result ofdomestic violenceinflicted by parents, which calls for legal punishments for abusers.

  展开2:Growing up in a family in which abuses take place on a daily basis, children will be likely to be mentally distorted and eventually commit violent crimes. In such cases, parents deserve severe punishment more than their kids.

  秒懂逻辑:法定监护人 + 家庭暴力【一边倒】

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  范文2

  ESSAY#005: Some people think human behaviors can be restricted by laws; others think laws have little effect. What is your opinion?

  论点1:Lawsinflict punishment of great severity to criminals, which can be acted as a deterrence for potential criminals as well as the mass public.

  展开1:Punishments offered by various legislations varies fromminor finestoimprisonment, or evendeath penaltyin some states,bindingthose who are afraid of such chastisements to the law.

  论点2:When profit gained by breaking the law outweighs the punishment, people would risk breaking the law.

  展开2:In financial crime, despite clear legal boundaries, it is common for bribery and corruption to show repeatedly when financial benefits are sheer.

  以上就是小编为大家介绍的奥克兰大学资讯,希望可以帮助到大家,如果还想了解更多关于PTE大作文攻略、PTE官方指南下载的资讯,请多多关注本网站,也可以添加我们微信kewo11。


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