很多英语考试的写作部分都是套路,AEIS考试也是如此,只要掌握了有关技巧,作文得高分不是什么难事,关键是你得能写到阅卷人的“心坎儿”里。
接下来,课窝考试网和大家说说如何四平八稳地写一篇英语议论文,写议论文,最保险的方式就是用三段法,简而言之,就是写“是什么,为什么,怎么办”。
那么在写作过程中,我们要注意什么呢?
1. 审清题意,以免跑题。
2. 拿到试卷后至少把题目要求阅读两遍再落笔,练习中也要注意。字迹清晰,切忌大篇幅改动 。
3. 不要使用重复词句,不要照抄题目。英语写作中经常出现重复使用某一词、词组、句式或抄写题目 的现象,这样会给阅卷者一种应试者词汇量不足,在凑字数的印象。

比如:
He likes going hiking but his sister doesn’t like going hiking.
Smith wanted to go to school where he wanted to work hard.
这两句话的得分就不会很高,因为它们中频繁出现了同一单词或短语,而且是like还有want这种low到爆的用法,阅卷人喜欢看到的是流畅、不重复、高级的表达方法。
要想避免重复并提高文章逼格,就一定要注意同义词转化,把同义的词句转化为另一种方式表达,使其看起来没那么low。方法有三种:
同义词转化
形容词转化为of+同根名词
very important = of great importance
very significant = of great significance
very valuable = of great value
very useful = of great use
very helpful = of great help
very harmful = of great harm
very beautiful = of great beauty
very helpful = of great help
very necessary = of great necessity
The existence of a government is veryimportant for its people.
The existence of a government is of greatimportance for its people.
词转化为动词短语
should应该 = be supposed to
like 喜欢 = be fond of
support 支持 = be in favor of
think 想;认为 = hold the viewthat
agree 同意;赞成 = approve of
conclude 得出结论 = come to/draw aconclusion
raise 提出 = set forth
use 使用 = make use of,take advantage of
词义具体化
good 好的 = outstanding;awesome
strange 陌生的 = peculiar; odd;weird
forever 永远 = perpetually
see 看见 = witness; spot
walk 走 = stride
get 取得 = obtain
help 帮助 = assist
picture 图画 = drawing;painting
big 大的 = immense;enormous; tremendous
避免重复句
避免了重复字词之后,还要避免重复句,遵循以下几种原则。
简洁性原则
两层含义:
1. 句式上无重复
一篇作文中,不要频繁出现同一句式,比如重复出现I would like to... We should...等被用烂的句式。
2. 语义上无重复
减少不必要的赘述,如并列句前后句意思重复。
长短句交替使用原则
何时适合使用短句?
描述文章的主题句、重要观点及结论句使用短句。
何时适合使用长句?
说理性的语句即罗列论据观点时,适合使用长句。
多使用特殊句式
倒装句:Only in this way can we protect our environment
强调句:it be+被强调部分+that
非谓语动词:ving/ved/to v
插入语
主动被动语态交替使用
原句:
They must finish their work before the endof this month because their boss is urging them.
修改后:
Their work must be finished before the endof this month because their boss is urging them.
句子结构要紧凑连贯
写作时要注意前后句连接流畅自然,关联词的使用和举例论证,这一点很关键。
先后次序关系:
to begin with / first of all / in the firstplace 首先
second of all/ in the second place 其次
last but not least / finally / eventually 最后
因果关系:
because / since / owing to/ in view of 由于
as a consequence /as a result 结果
转折关系:
however / but / and yet但是
递进关系:
moreover / furthermore 此外
on the one hand... on the other hand...一方面,另一方面
for one thing ... for another...同上
并列关系:
and / as well as 和;并且
either...or... 或者...或者...
对比关系:
similarly / in like manner相似地
in comparison 相较而言
举例论证:
for example 例如
for instance 例如
take...for example 以......为例
cite...as an example 以......为例
The example of ...can be cited as a properexample to illustrate my point of view.
...是一个阐明本人观点的很好的事例
大家在考试过程中可以遵循完整4步写作流程进行答题
1. 分析题目要求,确定写作主题方向。
2. 具体化作文的结构框架(属于哪一种类型的文章),确定写作方法和素材。
3. 填充框架,快速成文(三段法:是什么?为什么?怎么办?)注意运用用词和句式的原则。
4. 检查、定稿。
AEIS的作文只要掌握了这几点,你的文章就可以看起来很流畅通顺,其实,都是套路。
附:AEIS写作考试开篇与结尾模板句
开篇:
①对立句式:
先简单复述一下其他人的看法,然后提出自己的看法,适用于观点对立类型的写作任务,例句如下:
When asked about+话题,the vastmajority of people believe that+观点,while I think a little differently.
②描述现象句式:
引出需要剖析的问题或现象,然后评论:
Recently, the problem of +具体问题 hasaroused public/worldwide concern.
③引用法:
引出名人名言或有代表性的看法,随后引出文章要展开论述的观点,例如:
“Knowledge is power.” Such is the remarkmade by Bacon. This remark has been shared by more and more people.
“Education is not complete with graduation.” Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and morepeople agree with him.
结尾段:
①总结全文,得出结论,
②提出建议,号召行动,展望未来
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