在AEIS写作中当考生对一个论点只能想到一个或两个较少的论据的时候,需要用到这种主体段的写作形式,对论据进行深入挖掘,给出更多细节信息。
题目:Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这次,我们要写一段部分认同的段落,即认为自愿的社区服务更有利(此段作为主体段第二段出现)。我们先来给出一些观点:
Students more motivated if they can choose
Gain work experience, self confidence, skills
Good for CVs, career, university admissions, employers
我们可以发现,这些观点并不各自独立,它们都是“自愿的社区服务更有利”这个论点的延伸(原因、结果等),所以我们可以给出这个段落的大纲:
Plan: Voluntary (not compulsory) community service is positive — 论点
Students more motivated if they can choose — 解释1(为什么自愿的社区服务更有利?)
Gain work experience, self confidence, skills — 解释2(会导致什么?)
Good for CVs, career, university admissions, employers — 举例
将其扩展为段落:
On the other hand, theopportunityto dovoluntary community servicecould be extremely positive for high school students. By makingthese programsoptional, schools wouldensure that only motivated students took part.These young peoplewouldgain valuable experiencein anadult working environment, which could help tobuildtheirself confidenceandenhance their skills. Havingsuch experience and skillson their CVs could greatly improveschool leavers’ career prospects.For example, a period of voluntary work experience mightimpress a university admissions officer or a future employer.
同样,段落中绿色标注的是连接词,红色标注的是相关话题词。
最后总结,「Idea, Explain, Example」形式的主题段需要我们写5句话:
Idea
Explain (2 or 3 sentences)
Example
在解释的时候,我们可以多从原因、结果方面进行拓展;另外例子可以加在观点或任何一个解释后面,当然也可以给出两个例子来丰富这个段落
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