高分冲刺练习：AEIS作文范文修改（二）

在AEIS英语试卷中，分值最大的一部分就是作文。不少曾经参加过AEIS / S-AEIS考试的同学反应，在准备考试的过程中，写作提升的真是挺快的，分数很快就能进步不少。

话题：共享单车

1. 目前许多人使用共享单车

2. 共享单车的优缺点

3. 你的看法

Key Words about Bikes

自行车关键词

先来科普下和自行车相关的一些关键词吧：

bicycle/bike/cycle  自行车

tandem bicycle

协力车/双座或多座自行车

public bicycle service

公共自行车服务

bike sharing

自行车共享

ride a bicycle/take a ride/cycling/cycle/bicycle/bike

骑自行车

原来表示自行车的三个单词都可以用作动词，指“骑自行车”。

眼下非常流行的共享单车英文名你都知道吗？

Bluegogo

小蓝单车

ofo bicycle

小黄车

Mobike

摩拜单车

骑共享自行车有哪些操作呢？

app

应用程序（全称为application）

scan the QR code

扫描二维码

unlock the smart lock

解开智能锁

timer

计时器

骑自行车是个非常环保的出行方式。怎么描述它的好处呢？

keep fit

健身

Environmental protection/environment friendly/help the environment

环保的

上面提到的这三种共享单车都属于无桩（dockless）共享单车。最早出现的共享单车都是需要停靠“港”（dock）的。

下面我们来聊聊自行车出行。

1. He bikes to work everyday. It’s convenient and good for environmental protection.

他每天骑车去上班，既方便又环保。

2. I choose cyclingbecause it helps to keep me fit.

我选择骑自行车出行是因为它可以帮助我健身。

3. I rode a tandem bicycle with my friend yesterday.

昨天我和朋友一起骑了双人自行车。

4. People start to use public bicycle service in the city.

在这座城市，大家都开始骑公共自行车了。

5. If you wanna take a ride, just download the app and scan the QR code. Unlocking the smart lock means you have started the timer.

如果你想骑单车，只要下载应用，扫描二维码就行。解开智能锁意味着计时器已开启。

作文展开思路

第一段：可以客观叙述共享单车现状：

高分版：

Bike-sharing servicestook offin Chinese cities in the past two years. They allows riders to hire bikes for about one yuan per hourvia a mobile app, anddrop them off forthe next user.

Customers are able topicka bike anywhere in the city (thanks to the GPS-enabled app) and leave it anywhere at the end of their journey.

简单版：

Users can rent a bike at a low cost, usually around 1 yuan an hour,depending on the brand. The services mostly target short-distance travel, such as between a subway station and work, or from home to the grocery store. They usually require adeposit for registration.

第二段：分点阐述共享单车的优缺点

1. 优点：

Bike sharing plays a positive role in many ways－meeting publicneeds, solving the "last mile problem" in urban public transport andeasing urban traffic.

高分过渡版：

The service hasreduced traffic congestionandcut auto emissions, but haphazardly parked bikes often block sidewalks, causing complaints.

2. 缺点：

Bike sharing has brought new problems to the city management,such as illegal parking and entering and exiting private areas without approval.

Shared bikes are easily accessible to children as a result of its technical defects. It is reported that some accidents happened to children when they were riding shared bikes.

The shared bikes are often parked at random and often block sidewalks.

第三段：总结你的看法

Rules should be released to regulate the use and park of sharing bikes.

For example,forbid children under the age of 12 from riding shared bikes, or ban the shared bikes enter private areas, and so on.

The bike sharing companies should be responsible for the park of the bikes. High technology can be used to help the bikes to be parked in the specified locations.

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