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AEIS写作考试：把握以下六个关键点至关重要

　　AEIS写作考试是很多学生在考试中失分严重的部分，所以同学们一定要多加关注，可以利用一些写作细节技巧来提升成绩，其中的时态学习是最基础的部分，那么在AEIS写作考试如何正确使用时态呢?下面就和小编一起看看吧。

　　1.现在我们总比过去好的多。

　　Anyway, things are much better than before.

　　(than before自然就是今昔对比，不用再有at present)

　　2.上海，目前完全有条件搞的更快一点。

　　Shanghai is another example. It has all the necessary conditions for faster progess.

　　(同理)

　　3.当前，全世界都在关注着我国的改革。

　　The whole word is watching the reforms in our country.

　　(is watching现在进行时，“当前”可以省了)

　　4.未来经济发展在很大程度上取决于......

　　The development of our economy in the futurewill, to a large extent depend on…The development of our economy will depend on a large extent on….、

　　(对比两句，will就是将来，所以in the future的时间表示可以去了)

　　5.过去两个超级大国主宰世界，现在情况变了。

　　The worldused tobe dominated by two superpowers. Now things have changed.

　　(同理)

　　6.过去没有人知道淮河能够徒步的......

　　Nobody had ever known that one could walk across the …...

　　(同理)

　　二.数的表达方法

　　1.我们应该采取一系列措施......

　　We should adopta series ofmeasures to ensure that…We should adopt measures to ensure that...

　　(measures一个复数即是很多的意思，a series of 可以不要)

　　2.在这一时期，多种物资的供应严重缺乏。

　　Throughout this period, there was severe shortage ofa great variety of goods.

　　Throughout this period, there was severe supplies shortage.

　　(同理)

　　3.深入实际工作对找到各种问题的解决办法十分重要。

　　Plunging yourselves into practical work is very important for you to find solutions toall sorts of problems.

　　To solve these problems, it is important that you plunge yourself into practical work.

　　(同理)

　　三.动词性重复

　　1986年，国家教育委员会，卫生部文件：外国留学生和研究学者，须做艾滋病检查，对坚持不接受检查，且劝说无效的，不得安排学习。

　　The 1986 document of the state education commission and MOH states: foreign students, researchers, and scholars must undergo an AIDS test; persons who refuse and cannot beto do somay not be accepted for studies.

　　(请注意对于“坚持不接受检查，且劝说无效”直接一个so,简单清晰，如果让大家写，是不是有是一大串定语从句了呢)

　　四.名词性重复

　　最后，20年来，中国发生了很大变化，包括中国的权利系统和中国的法律制度，但是，发生在中国的权利系统和法律制度方便的变化却并没有像有些人说的那么大，甚至可以说，在这方面没有发生本质性的变化，这就是中国官方说的政治体制改革滞后的问题。

　　Lastly, many changes have taken place in China in the past 20 years, including those in the power structure and legal system. However,such changesare not great as…..

　　(同理如上)

　　五.用其他名词做总结

　　坚持紧急建设必须依靠科学技术，科学技术工作必须面向经济建设的原则，促进科技与经济的有机结合。

　　We must ensure that economic development is driven by science and technology, and that development of science and technology is geared to the needs of economic development, and enable science and technology to serve the economy.

　　We must ensure that economic development is driven by science and technology, and that development of science and technology is geared to the needs of economic development.The two aspects must be well-harmonized.

　　六.省略汉语中的范畴词

　　名词性范畴，动词性范畴。

　　先科普一下什么是范畴词：范畴词是指汉语命名中倾向于加范畴的词语，如问题、状态、情况、工作，有时本身没有实质的意义，翻译时可以省去不译。

　　比如“贫富差距的问题”，如果直译为“the problem regarding the wealth gap” 并没有错，但比较啰嗦，因为差距本身就是一个问题，因此在翻译中可将范畴词“问题”删除，下面请看例子：

　　1.计划工作

　　a serious mistake in the work of planninga serious mistake in planning

　　2.密切合作的关系

　　to ensure a relationship of close cooperation between…to ensure close cooperation between...

　　3.铺张浪费的行为

　　we must oppose the practice of extravagancewe must oppose extravagance

　　4.采取......的态度

　　we must adopt the attitude of …..

　　we should admit …..

　　七.消除同义重复出现

　　这是通向富裕和繁荣的唯一出路。

　　This is the only road leading to affluence and prosperity.

　　This is the only road to prosperity.

　　如何写好书信体作文结尾

　　优质案例走一波

　　1.如果你认为我能帮上任何忙的话，请尽管告诉我，我会尽力的。

　　If you think that I can be of any help, please let me know and I’ll certainly do what I can.

　　2.然而，如果你们能够给我调换一台相机或者是退还我钱的话，怎么方便就怎么做，我将十分的满意。

　　I would, however, be perfectly satisfied if you would kindly replace the camera or refund my money, whichever is more convenient.

　　3.我希望看到你们进行及时的调查并随时告知我事情的进展如何。

　　I would like to see a timely investigation conducted and would like to be informed of the progress.

　　4.我希望你们联系一下我买车的汽车经销商，对你们的错误做出解释。

　　I would like you to contact the auto dealer where I bought the car, explaining your error.

　　5.我希望这些建议能够在你做决定时有所裨益。

　　I hope you find these suggestions useful in helping you make your decision.

　　6.同时，如果此问题不能得以迅速解决，我希望您能允许我搬入另外一个房间。

　　Meanwhile, if the problem cannot be solved quickly, I would like you to allow me to move to another room.

　　7.您能否就我的课程和考试事项给我一些建议，特别是针对我目前的状况是否能够给予我一些特别的关照?

　　Would you please advise me regarding my courses and exams, particularly if there will be any special consideration given to me in light of my current situation?

　　8.如果您能尽快派一位工程人员前来维修一下我房间里的供暖系统，我将十分感谢。

　　I would be most grateful if you would send an engineer to fix the heating system in my room as soon as possible.

　　9.我十分乐意支付由此而涉及到的相关服务费用。

　　I will of course be willing to pay for any service charge involved.

　　10.我希望以上信息能够使你在我的家乡玩得愉快。

　　I hope the above information will help you enjoy your stay in my hometown.

　　11.鉴于我们深感应该得到某种补偿，我们诉求你们全额退还我们的餐费。

　　Since we feel we should be compensated somehow, we ask you to refund the total cost of our meal.

　　12.好吧，我就写到这里吧，我已经迫不及待地期盼着你对这封信的回复了。

　　Well, let me finish here and I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter.

　　13.做不到这一点，我将不得不坚持要你们全额退还我所支付的全价。

　　Failing that, I will have to insist on a refund in full of the price which I paid for it.

　　14.敬请马上取消我的卡，并请做出必要的安排发给我另一张卡。

　　Could you please cancel my card immediately and make the necessary arrangements to issue me with a replacement card?

　　15.假如你们有必要给我打电话，我的号码是123456789。

　　Should you ever wish to call me, here is my number: 123456789.

　　16.无论如何，请确认能否前来。

　　Anyway, do let me know if you can make it.

　　17.我希望您会发现他确如我所推荐的他那样好。

　　I hope you’ll find he is just as good as I’m now recommending him to be.

　　18.如果您还有什么别的问题，敬请随时联系我，我的电子邮箱地址如：

　　And should you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me at the following e-mail address.

　　19.我随信附上了我的简历以及我目前经济状况的一份明细和我的英语等级证明。

　　I have enclosed my resume as well as a statement of my current financial status and my English proficiency level.

　　20.我还想问一下我和我太太是否可以合在一起申请，还是我们必须要分开来。

　　I’d also like to know if my wife and I can make one application, or whether we’ll have to apply separately.

　　21.我期盼早日收到您的信息。

　　I look forward to receiving the information at your earliest convenience.

　　22.我将于8月26日从上海抵达伦敦，如果您能派人接一下或者至少给我发一下我该如何独自从伦敦Heathrow机场前往大学的详细情况我将万分感激，因为这将是我初次到英国。

　　I will arrive in London on August 26 from Shanghai and would be very grateful if you could send someone to pick me up or, at the least, send me the details of how to get to the university by myself from London Heathrow Airport, as this will be my first time to the UK.

　　23.我随信附上了我的简历，里面详细列举了我的资历和经历，还有一份加州大学的公开推荐信。

　　I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from California State University.

　　24.你能否告诉我获得学生签证我需要做些什么，还有就是这个过程需要多久?

　　Could you tell me what I have to do to obtain a student visa and how long the process will take?

　　25.我还非常感激如果你能告诉我我都该随身带些什么东西，比如衣服、书籍或其它我在加拿大没法买到的东西。

　　I would also be grateful if you could tell me what I should bring with me, for example, clothes, books or anything else I cannot get in Canada.

　　26.如果还能够申请会员资格，我期望你们能给我寄张加入贵俱乐部的申请表来，并告知我由此所涉及到的费用问题。

　　If memberships are still available, I would appreciate it very much if you would send me an application form for joining the club and let me know the fee involved.

　　27.请告知我是否可以成为贵图书馆的临时会员，以及开馆的时间和收费等方面的信息。

　　Please let me know if it is possible to become a temporary member of the library, together with details of opening hours, fees, etc.

　　28.随信有我的简历，详细介绍了我以前的工作经验和资历。

　　Enclosed you will find my resume which further details my previous work experience and qualifications.

　　29.我还想请求退还学费，而且希望我不至于太晚了，没法全额偿还了。

　　I would also like to request a tuition refund and hope I am not too late to receive the full reimbursement.

　　高分作文

　　有技巧

　　认真审题

　　考生切忌信手拈来，提笔就写，根本不审题，想到哪儿就写到哪儿，置考试要求于不顾，作文第一步是仔细审题，考生要仔细阅读试题要求及相关信息，如文字，图画等，准确把握出题者意图。

　　列出提纲，慎重落笔

　　虽说考试时间有限，但是切忌匆忙落笔开始胡写乱诌。